A christmas Story
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A christmas Story
Give me your opinion .. Angel just wrote this cuz 1. Angel want to improve her writing , and 2 she was bored , and She is really in christmas mode..
( hote its under the right topic...)
It was Christmas morning, and I ran downstairs and pounced on my parent’s bed! “Its Christmas, Its Christmas! Get up Get up! “I shouted in excitement. I jumped off their bed and ran straight for the Christmas tree. I glanced at the brilliantly lit lights, and then at the colorful wrapping paper. I picked up the biggest present in sight. It had silvery wrapping paper with a bright red bow. The lights reflected off the silver paper. I tapped three times on the box. “Tap! Tap! Tap!” I dwelled on what could be inside this beautifully wrapped present, and decided it was probably clothes until I heard a whimper inside. I peeked through a little tiny hole in the top of the box. There was something in it moving around. I jolted for my parent’s room “Mom, Dad Something is moving in the box Hurry Up!!” I grabbed my mom and dads hands and pulled them with all my might to the dimly lit room with the tree. I pointed to the box. “It’s that one! It’s that one!” I slid the box out from under the tree, and pulled the top off and inside was a “A PUPPY!” I screeched at the top of my lungs. I picked the puppy up, and examined it for a moment. I grabbed the bow from the box, and wrapped it around the puppy’s neck. “I shall call you … Rudolf.” I giggled.
( hote its under the right topic...)
It was Christmas morning, and I ran downstairs and pounced on my parent’s bed! “Its Christmas, Its Christmas! Get up Get up! “I shouted in excitement. I jumped off their bed and ran straight for the Christmas tree. I glanced at the brilliantly lit lights, and then at the colorful wrapping paper. I picked up the biggest present in sight. It had silvery wrapping paper with a bright red bow. The lights reflected off the silver paper. I tapped three times on the box. “Tap! Tap! Tap!” I dwelled on what could be inside this beautifully wrapped present, and decided it was probably clothes until I heard a whimper inside. I peeked through a little tiny hole in the top of the box. There was something in it moving around. I jolted for my parent’s room “Mom, Dad Something is moving in the box Hurry Up!!” I grabbed my mom and dads hands and pulled them with all my might to the dimly lit room with the tree. I pointed to the box. “It’s that one! It’s that one!” I slid the box out from under the tree, and pulled the top off and inside was a “A PUPPY!” I screeched at the top of my lungs. I picked the puppy up, and examined it for a moment. I grabbed the bow from the box, and wrapped it around the puppy’s neck. “I shall call you … Rudolf.” I giggled.
Via- Heavy Sleeper
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Re: A christmas Story
It looks like a wall of text. ;-;
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Re: A christmas Story
UGH really!!! Ha DUR !!
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Re: A christmas Story
No, I mean, a WALL.Angel960 wrote:UGH really!!! Ha DUR !! :evil: :P
A GIANT WALL.
OH GOD.
OH GOD NO.
OH GOD, IT'S FALLING ON ME
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Re: A christmas Story
Thats the point ..Angel wants it to crush you FLAT!!!
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